Again here are the tips to help you remember these seven Keys to the Kingdom.
It will always be better to say “she jogged” than “She ran slowly”.
Without change there is no story; What brand of candy is it honey?
How hot is it in here?
What is she really saying?
Polish off the grease before you ride, bucko.
Change it up or give up.
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